https://youtu.be/5l0V1OTx-3w
After this pitch I really felt like I perfected my pitch to the point where I was able to have a hook, an explanation, and people wanting more. I changed my content most from pitch no. 1 to pitch no. 2, so in this pitch I really just tried to make it as concise and to the point as possible, while also providing the hook and as much detail as possible about my product. I feel like the comments about how good the outdoors made my pitch stuck well with me, which is why I also did this pitch outside again because I really feel like it sets the mood for my product and gives it extra context. All in all I took the comments made to me about my pitch and really tried to make it the best version yet, which I feel like I accomplished in this one. I did not really change much from the second to third pitch, as I just focused on being clearer, louder, and straight to the point better, because those are the comments I was seeing from my previous ones. In conclusion from my previous comments and feedback, I feel like this is my best one yet as I made the changes people left for me. From here on out I will definitely have this pitch memorized if I ever need it again.
Hello Danielle,
ReplyDeleteI have watched all 3 of your elevator pitches and I can say that you have improved with each pitch. You have grown your confidence and content a lot from the feedback given to you. I appreciate you taking some of my constructive advice from previous pitches. I agree with you that you were more vocal and clear with your pitch.
I really like how you made big and noticeable changes to each pitch because it shows that you care about the impression you leave on viewers. I think your pitch was great because it was interesting, relatable like always, and this one was definitely the best. You seemed very confident and determined to express what you are trying to sell.
ReplyDeleteHey Danielle, the main thing that stood out to me was the boost in confidence from the previous elevator pitches. The determination to reach out and relate to your customers was definitely present. In comparison to the other pitches, the delivery and details included in this pitch have shown the improvement from the other pitches. It's great to see the feedback given being put into play! Awesome job!
ReplyDeleteHey Danielle,
ReplyDeleteYou did a really great job with this elevator pitch, and I loved how you had the prop of the cup and straw to further enhance what you were talking about and make it realistic. That really added a new level to your elevator pitch, and helped to capture and maintain attention throughout. Great job with this elevator pitch!